zman wrote:I love the comments to my creative writing.
There was no story, or no essay format inherent in your writing, therefore I do not think it qualifies as creative writing.
zman wrote:Anyways, It looks like I made friends with my opinions and writing abilities.
We just want you to start making coherent arguments.
zman wrote:The point, at least for me is the environment you live in. Global warming is going to effect my area of the world way after coastal regions and southern regions of the world.
Lies. Just because your area of the world does not flood, if global warming does exist (I am taking a neutral approach here, so don't argue the 'if'), the logically the temperature would begin to rise in ALL parts of the world. Certain biological processes are in tune with a temperature that has only a few degrees in which it may vary, so perhaps in a few years certain plants will die.
Also, your food must invariably come from some source other than your own back yard - barring farmers who produce for themselves and the pitiful vegetable gardens some people like to tend - and thus any change in climate in those areas will effect food supplies and businesses based upon nutrition.
Just because you cannot perceive the effects around you directly, does not mean something will not affect you in some way, shape, or form.
zman wrote: So when people start acusing me of stuff and charging me money for stuff related to the environment or any other touchy feeling thing we got to take care of or else. I get a bit upset when there is little to no regard of facts, trends and real science to explain what is going on. Usually it's a lot of hot air of only part of the real story.
No one has accused YOU specifically, and I would imagine that you are still a student in at most High School by judging your sentence structure. And no one has asked you for any money either (if they have, then those are donations).
Tax dollars you say? Well, all research has applications in fields other than their initial fields of thought. So any money you are asked to hunk out would be sent to that instead. And besides, is lowering CO2 emissions any worse than sending undertrained and overstretched armies off to a runaway war?
And usually there are SCIENTISTS arguing this stuff, publishing mounds of material with which statisticians can make predictions. That is what science is: using facts and figures to interpolate some possible interaction. What you are trying to say is that scientists are not giving valid hypothesis and data, which is just absurd. Who would you prefer spend their lives researching such things? Rodeo clowns?
By the way, periods are not replacements for commas.
zman wrote:Right now, I only see a part of the real story, but as an American, I get blamed for the whole deal.
You are blamed for exactly the complacency that you showed in the pitiful excuses for paragraphs. The fact that you are ignorant of the problem does not mean you are not responsible. If your smoking caused cancer, it isn't really your fault. Just the industrial plants, right? Wrong.
Ignorance is never an excuse. Crack open an English grammar book, and learn the language in which you are forming your thoughts. Then go out and research Global Warming so that way you can counter any blames placed on you concerning the matter.
As it stands, no one has blamed you for anything. They (meaning certain environmentalists, some scientists, other countries) blame the American Government for not placing stricter regulations concerning CO2 and related emissions (not that hard to do, and in the long run, efficiency is better for business).
zman wrote:So, that's that...
Yes it is.