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Post by Yehaa4.0 » Fri Jan 14, 2005 6:09 am

"Death of a Child"
Sorry I didn't get to stay.
To laugh and run and play.
To be there by your side.
I'm sorry that I had to die.

God sent me down to be with you,
to make your loving heart anew.
To help you look up and see
Both God and little me.

Mommy, I wish I could stay.
Just like I heard you pray.
But, all the angels did cry
when they told little me goodbye.

God didn't take me cause He's mad.
He didn't send me to make you sad.
But to give us both a chance to be
a love so precious .. don't you see?

Up here no trouble do I see
and the pretty angels sing to me.
The streets of gold is where I play
you'll come here too, mommy, someday.

Until the day you join me here,
I'll love you mommy, dear.
Each breeze you feel and see,
brings love and a kiss from me.
Lets see who gets tired first Yehaa........
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Post by ninja » Fri Jan 14, 2005 6:15 am

/me waves penis

bye bye

:woody:
Delete my posting account.

Thanks.
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Post by Skynet » Fri Jan 14, 2005 6:35 am

ninja wrote:/me waves penis

bye bye

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Post by spaghetti » Fri Jan 14, 2005 4:44 pm

Poetry is used to convey meaning through brevity, with structure and rythm conveying the bulk of the mood. Also I wish people would try for once to write a poem without using any of these words: angel, whisper, wind, angel, heart, child, time. There is enough great poetry in the world, read some of it.
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